4 Hours Raimaing!

The clock slows,
Insignificant
Paradox
Shadowed by
Hours that stay behind, stagnant,
Works static heartbeat.

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8 thoughts on “4 Hours Raimaing!

      1. Ha! Have you seen my output lately? I concur, and work bores me to death, nearly…that’s why I’ve so enjoyed these smaller forms. They offer me immediate satisfaction, plus I love to make things work, like syllable counts!

      2. I have seen a few, I haven’t had time to catch up on WordPress lately I’m afraid. You do seem to be on a role though… I think you should try your hand at a villanelle my friend. It’s a hard form, but I think you will do it beautifully 🙂

      3. Sorry my friend, mad rush at work. You’re welcome and I can’t wait to read the results. It’s definitely a challenge. Dylan Thomas’s ‘Do Not Go Gentle into that Good Night’ is one of my favourite poems, and my favourite Villanelle.

      4. Haha! That’s the one I have copy/pasted on my Word document right now, and I’m using it as an example. It’s amazing! I just never new what I Villanelle was until you mentioned it. I’ve always enjoyed that poem, and now I can enjoy it properly as I understand its structure and purpose…so thanks for that!

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